Processes like identifying key issues could be explained in more detail
More detailed information on key figures
When defining the goals, I would advise to make them much more precise.
Goals are not really evaluated in the report. There is no mention of why certain goals were not achieved and had to be extended. And consequently, there is no mention of which measures will be taken to achieve them in the future. If the existing measures remain the same or will be changed. I would add this information to the report, because without it the reader will be left with more questions than answers.
The value chain should be clarified. It would be helpful to describe the individual steps and their CSR impact in more detail, but also to clearly highlight which measures and goals are relevant.
The entire value chain could also be clearly displayed in a graph
What would benefit the credibility would be the consideration and addressing of negative developments of the past, but also of the future.
Better structure: display material topics graphically at the beginning of the report and to structure the report accordingly.
The report contains a lot of information that is not understandable for laypersons without the necessary background knowledge, so I recommend either providing the necessary knowledge or choosing simplified formulations.
Emphasize the graphical delimitation of the topics more and to explain the symbols used.